Before you submit, get an experienced second opinion.
I can conduct an independent review of your tender against the question, specification and evaluation criteria — whether your response was written by your team, an external writer or AI.
Does your bid tell a compelling story? When reviewing your bid, I’ll assess the following areas:
Compliance — Have you answered everything and ensured your eligibility?
Evidence — Are assertions supported?
Specificity — Does it sound like your organisation?
Scoring potential — Does the response make it easy for evaluators to award marks against the published criteria?
AI risk — Is there generic language, repetition, invented evidence, unsupported claims or material that doesn’t reflect how your organisation actually works?
Clarity — Is it easy for a non-specialist evaluator to understand?
Word economy — Is valuable word count being wasted?
Differentiation — Why you rather than another credible bidder?
Single Response Review — from £125
Full Bid Review — from £450
Price confirmed in advance based on length and complexity. Send me the tender documents and your draft, and I’ll confirm the scope, price and turnaround before you commit.
“I have used Gary's services for a decade, most recently to review and critically assess some bids. He has a rare ability to turn complex requirements, technical detail and challenging subject matter into clear, compelling bid responses. He has helped us to stand out, score highly and win more business."
Rosa Napolitano, Chief Operating Officer, Psyomics Ltd